tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622841293750940019.post6810437222719739195..comments2014-04-19T08:59:02.757-07:00Comments on Clara Zane: Author: Friday Flash: A Night AloneAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05780058146645588723noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622841293750940019.post-29933184598965071742014-03-23T00:41:18.755-07:002014-03-23T00:41:18.755-07:00Oh so sad - good ghost story!Oh so sad - good ghost story!Helen A. Howellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12748128819820230841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622841293750940019.post-5620381273552078242014-03-22T07:39:39.954-07:002014-03-22T07:39:39.954-07:00Basically what Steve and Marc said. The verisimili...Basically what Steve and Marc said. The verisimilitude of all the other details made the ghost aspect very compelling. The spookiest part for me was when he returned to the bedroom after hearing the message and the bed was <i>still</i> indented. Katherine Hajerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08270232675026751342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622841293750940019.post-48321379348649000772014-03-21T15:29:06.169-07:002014-03-21T15:29:06.169-07:00A very atmospheric piece Clara. I wonder if his fu...A very atmospheric piece Clara. I wonder if his future nights will be wakeful and lonely, or if Sandra, in her ghostly form will keep him company and help him sleep?Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622841293750940019.post-12250315036066049932014-03-21T12:48:21.605-07:002014-03-21T12:48:21.605-07:00Nice ghost story, and elegantly handled a classic ...Nice ghost story, and elegantly handled a classic situation. It's almost as if the ghost might be continuing the normal routine of life. I didn't think prank, but now that I do, that would be one heck of a challenge. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10076907555584959149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622841293750940019.post-56367152370892439492014-03-21T12:39:40.043-07:002014-03-21T12:39:40.043-07:00How sad. Like John, I hoped it wasn't so, but ...How sad. Like John, I hoped it wasn't so, but my hope turned to loss and sorrow for the husband. Unfortunate to spend his first night along, knowing there will plenty more.Stephenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04753736809917062955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622841293750940019.post-26542950467318850832014-03-21T12:12:57.430-07:002014-03-21T12:12:57.430-07:00So sad... but she loved him enough to try to comfo...So sad... but she loved him enough to try to comfort him in his aloneness.Larry Kollarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08317037795075278427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622841293750940019.post-35932613332309361742014-03-21T03:28:43.942-07:002014-03-21T03:28:43.942-07:00Interesting that she came back to their shared bed...Interesting that she came back to their shared bed. Curious as to whether it was somehow to say goodbye to him, or that the ghost was unaware it was deceased and was trying to carry on 'life' as normalSulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7622841293750940019.post-20892128554577653052014-03-20T21:30:38.566-07:002014-03-20T21:30:38.566-07:00Here I was hoping against hope that Sandra was pla...Here I was hoping against hope that Sandra was playing a practical joke on our narrator. Of course in fiction, tragedy is always more likely than a prank. Poor folks...John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.com